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By Blood_Moon on Mar 23, 2017 at 10:35 AM

(Pretty generic.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 13, 2017 at 11:41 AM

(So yeah, people need to know at least where they stand. Then they can react to it.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 13, 2017 at 10:56 AM

(Eh, your words.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 13, 2017 at 9:51 AM

(Well? Do you know your place in the world?)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 13, 2017 at 9:36 AM

(I base this on what I got. Anyway, people in puberty have several issues, but one is a result of others: They bark at anything they see. Like they're now allowed into the pecking order, and recklessly peck around, not used to being pecked themself.)

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By Blood_Moon on Mar 7, 2017 at 8:29 AM

(And what are his strengths?)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 7, 2017 at 8:25 AM

(Okay, I guess that's too broad... I assume you're somewhere in puberty, right? Around 16 years old? Doesn't have to be physically, but I'm speaking more mentally.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 7, 2017 at 7:47 AM

(It's not that hard, really. Basically, don't sweat the small stuff.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 7, 2017 at 7:38 AM

(You want to know how they can do that?)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 9:45 AM

(That's pretty mature there. Well, if you have something more to bring then boasts, then message me again. Until then, goodbye.)

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By Blood_Moon on Mar 6, 2017 at 9:37 AM

(Pretty damn lazy is pretty vague. How is he lazy?)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 9:32 AM

(May check the text of your own profile before throwing such blames. Besides the point, as there's an ocean between us, I can't really force you to. But I give those advices in honest, even if I come across as an ass. What you do with them, is up to you. Others can help you improve as well, far more then you could on your own. But you have to open yourself up to them.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 9:11 AM

(I'm an older man then you are.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 8:15 AM

(Then do it again.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 8:06 AM

(Try studying the basics first.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 7:57 AM

(Then it might be smart to start researching about writing itself. Enthousiasm is one thing, but enthousiam without proper guidance and you get something like "The Room". If you're lucky.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 7:41 AM

(It wouldn't. Because of us both. I'm not socially skilled enough to properly say what I want to, while you have trouble with seeing things from outside your own perspective. Granted, I do too, so only hindsight may make me realize this. But let me ask you something here: What do you write your story for? For gains like money and fame, or for entertainment? If it's entertainment, who's entertainment? The entertainment of the audience, or your own?)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 7:21 AM

(... I think you might be missing the point. It took me a while to understand it completely as well, but "perfect" does not mean "without flaws" for Mary Sues.)

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By Princess_Twilight_Sparkle on Mar 6, 2017 at 6:44 AM

(Yes you are. That, or you have no sense of self-reflection.)

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By Blood_Moon on Mar 2, 2017 at 11:17 AM

Mhmm. Seriously, give me some flaws. Make them crack under pressure. Have them be anti social. Make them a jerk!

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