By Aria1225 on Feb 21, 2011 at 7:34 PM
Thanks! :) Well now you know that my character has some major issues
By Aria1225 on Feb 21, 2011 at 7:32 PM
Ohhh... Sorry. What did you think of my story?
By Aria1225 on Feb 21, 2011 at 7:27 PM
Are you there? I know it was long but not that long
By Aria1225 on Feb 21, 2011 at 6:36 PM
I eventually get to my house. When I get there I am greeted by my beloved cat Jinjuu. I sit on the couch and turn on the television. The news headliner talks about suicide. “I swear, Jinjuu, humans are so stupid killing themselves getting into other people business… ugh! Stupid!” “They aren’t all that bad, Aria. They are better than what you think…” “Jinjuu humans have had no positive impact in my life, they are all bad!” “But…” I sigh. “Jinjuu, I am the way I am because of humans. My father wanted to take over the world and thought he could do that by starting a super human race. He thought the perfect lab rat would be me. So he made me into the strongest thing he could possibly think of, a dragon. But soon he realized that his plan was going to back fire and tried to get rid of me. He had the whole city trying to kill me but he didn’t know that he made me immortal. So eventually I ran away and vowed to get revenge on my father and all those who try to kill me.” “They still aren’t all bad, Aria… you could be loved by them if you tried…” “It is better to be feared instead of loved, Jinjuu.” “O-okay…” I see that it is getting late and we head upstairs and go to bed.
By Aria1225 on Feb 21, 2011 at 6:36 PM
He asks. Perfect! It says. “Do you live alone?” I asked him. “Yes.” Good. We walk in silence for an hour then we get to his house. We go inside. “Nice place you have here.” I lied. “Thanks.” He replies. “I have to go do something, wait right here.” Before giving me a chance to reply he leaves. I take this as an opportunity to look for a murder weapon. I find his guns, perfect. This has to look like an accident. I think to myself. When he comes back I ask him to show me is guns, he gets one out and my eyes glow scarlet. “What is this? I can’t move!” He says. “Put the gun to your head!” I command. He unwillingly does as instructed. “Shoot!” He does as a say and kills himself under my control. I Leap out the window and spread my massive black wings and fly away, invisible in the night sky.
By Aria1225 on Feb 21, 2011 at 6:36 PM
I am walking alone at midnight. The city was filled with life… but I blended right in, no one suspected a thing. I walked alone listening to my iPod seemingly innocent and venerable. I make my way over to the corner of a busy intersection and wait for the traffic to clear. As I am waiting a young teenage boy walks up to me. “What is a beautiful young girl like you doing here all alone? Someone might take advantage of this opportunity…” I pay no attention to him hoping he will go away. After the light changes I cross but he follows me. “What’s your name?” He asks me. “Aria.” “That’s a beautiful name, like you.” He says. Aria here is your chance kill the boy. The demonic voice said “I can’t do that, not right now…” “Who are you talking to?” He asks me. “No one!” I say too quickly. No one is going to miss him now come on! We don’t have all night! Wait and I will we have to get into a private place. I think back to it. “Do you want to come to my house, Aria?”
By Aria1225 on Feb 21, 2011 at 6:35 PM
okay it is really long and kinda like a story from a book
By Aria1225 on Feb 21, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Is it okay if i send you my story i wrote?
By Lone_Wolf_Bri on Feb 21, 2011 at 6:13 PM
*shadow* i hope you accept me as a friend i know sometimes i can be frightening but please understand
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