-Scorpion-

By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 6:02 PM

*finally shouts* you shouldn't!

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 6:02 PM

- he lets go- - I stand there- - he growls- why does it matter to you that I'm taking my daughter home?

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By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:58 PM

*shrugs as you teleport* ok.... *looks at cage and shakes my head*

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:56 PM

- he has a dark aroroa around him- my dad: I'm taking her home. She ran because I grounded her.

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By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:52 PM

That kinda raises more questions than it answers.

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:50 PM

My dad: yes I do. I came to get my daughter. - he picks me up-

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By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:47 PM

Huh.... So what about you.... Who are you.

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By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:25 PM

Ok..... *Looks at Jonny* did he not know he was going to fight?

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:24 PM

- he turns around- my dad: who are you?

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By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:17 PM

Huh.... Can I talk to any one here or.....

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:04 PM

- he fonda me and grabs me-

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By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 5:01 PM

And what's that?

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By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 4:45 PM

Dangerous huh.... Well I can hold my own.

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 4:38 PM

Me: y-yes sir.... - I run - - I keep running- - my dad walks through looking for me-

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By ZecoraZebra on Aug 26, 2014 at 4:36 PM

Really sorry I have to go. See you soon.

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By ZecoraZebra on Aug 26, 2014 at 4:32 PM

Yeah my first critic was Roger Ebert. He never inspired me or anything but he was just an awesome guy. Yeah see that's one of the biggest struggles with authors of the romantic genre is making the dialogue sound real. But Sekai-Ichi does that right because it had the smart idea of making the leads both be co-workers and them both taking there job seriously so they talk just like anyone else in the building. But I don't have a genre I'm into so I'll give ANYTHING a try.

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 4:30 PM

Me: I was getting away from my father

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By Wing_Shot on Aug 26, 2014 at 4:27 PM

He was the first guy I saw?

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 4:20 PM

- I do so- - I'm still scared-

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By alicia2000 on Aug 26, 2014 at 4:17 PM

Me: mmm! - I get scared and shake- - I struggle-

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