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By BLAHGUY126 on Jan 3, 2012 at 12:18 PM

AND... Boom. Two fanfics uploaded TODAY! 1. http://randomman295.deviantart.com/art/My-Little-Portal-Part-2-277455355 2. http://randomman295.deviantart.com/#/d4l6uwq Enjoy. BTW, loved yours. Sad, but very well written.

By mipekeponi85 on Jan 1, 2012 at 10:14 PM

in fact i do! http://fav.me/d4kwl3i hope you enjoy it!

By BLAHGUY126 on Jan 1, 2012 at 9:16 PM

*in heavy weapon guy voice* THANK YOU! So, in case you were wondering, part 2 is 2/3rds done, and MUCH more randomness has arrived on my sites! I have photos now. HAH. And in other news, I'm doing crossovers of video games and MLP... I have Roller Coaster Tycoon 2 tracks themed after the Mane 6 (and spike) that are... HER: http://themeparkreview.com/game_exchange/index.php?search_type=user&media_keywords=Randomman295 WHABAM. Enjoy. Does you has projects on interwebs?!?

By mipekeponi85 on Dec 28, 2011 at 11:38 PM

Hey BLAHGUY! I read My Little Portal Part 1. Good job on it! I loved the details you gave about the surroundings and the dialogue is engaging! I would be careful about using, what my Creative Writing teacher called, stateMEnts. Phrases like "Well, that certainly freaked the hell out of me." are generally unnecessary and should be replaced by reactions (I took a step back) or dialogue ("What?", I screamed). The story picked up very nicely at the end and I can't wait for the next installment! Check this site out (http://www.fictionfactor.com/bolts.html) we had to look through in CRW 150. It helped me a TON on my own writing and I'm sure it'll help you too! I actually opened an account on DeviantArt yesterday and I should be uploading a chapter from my own fanfic pretty soon. I'll give you the URL when it's up! Hope this helps and know that I'm here to help ya! :D

By BLAHGUY126 on Dec 23, 2011 at 4:55 PM

Howabout THIS: WHABAM. http://randomman295.deviantart.com/#/d4jzvtp

By mipekeponi85 on Dec 22, 2011 at 4:10 PM

I LOVE TANKS!!! XD

By BLAHGUY126 on Dec 22, 2011 at 4:03 PM

Tanks!

By mipekeponi85 on Dec 22, 2011 at 3:57 PM

I read the first few parts of your Twilight Zone crossover. I like the premise of the story, humans adapting to pony life. Just a small suggestion: Allow the world you create and the characters unfold the adventure. Less narration and more dialogue, scenery description, and action will make the story come alive and fun to read. Hope this helps :)

By BLAHGUY126 on Dec 22, 2011 at 2:30 PM

Idk, constructive, I guess. xD But srsly, don't bother reading if you don't have the time.

By mipekeponi85 on Dec 22, 2011 at 2:20 PM

Ha! Yeah! So what kinda feedback you lookin for?

By BLAHGUY126 on Dec 22, 2011 at 12:26 PM

Has work stopped sucking yet?

By mipekeponi85 on Dec 19, 2011 at 9:01 PM

SWEET! I will read it when work stops sucking so long :(

By BLAHGUY126 on Dec 19, 2011 at 9:10 AM

Aha! I have a Deviantart and I'm looking for feedback. I have on there a Twilight zone/MLP crossover on there too. Link here: randomman295.deviantart.com Enjoi.

By mipekeponi85 on Dec 18, 2011 at 8:10 PM

why yes, yes i am! I enjoy reading what other bronies' imaginations conjure :D

By BLAHGUY126 on Dec 18, 2011 at 7:39 PM

HEHROW fellow random brony. Are you an avid fanfic reader?